oops…

The poem of the day prompt for april 4 is ‘since….’
Now I was in a hurry to post and didn’t realize something from my poem. it didn’t make sense with the title I gave it. Oh well. better luck next time!
Here goes anyway…

Since closing his eyes
“He felt the weight of her speech pulling him into sleep
Breathing to feel his soul
He swallowed the warm water diving deeper and deeper
His eyes lulled closed by the waves
Breathing forced out
Breathing warmth in
He was in his conclusion
Freed”

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