another oops…

I don’t know what is wrong with my proofreading skills lately but its driving me crazy!
I entered another poem– this one there was an “in” inserted instead of the word “him”.
Good God…
Anyway here is the poem (corrected that is). The prompt for the day was journey.
All Enchantments Gone
Stumbling through life he had made a discovery
Feeling loss was ordinary
Weeping he held his head in his hands as the world blurred away
There was nothing more he could do to save himself
The sky looked down on him with disdain
Never again would there be another

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